私の日本語を始めたきっかけ

My life has come to a temporarily unchangeable pattern. Busy working all the time at working days and busy playing and hanging out at weekends. As what I told Noona, it is really hard to squeeze a second to play around and rest in office. Once you finish one task, you should be preparing another one right away, otherwise you will lag behind. Often you are occupied by three, four tasks, some easy, some time-consuming, that your time will be covered by all the multi-tasks. Toilet and pantry time is valuable, of course sunny time is valuable too! For sure, I won't torture myself, as Noona's having a nice work with normal working hours, we can chit chat on icq to a bearable extent and that's the replenishing water source in the desert!

Exam is coming, I have to prepare a short essay to tell my teacher my motivation to learn Japanese. Here's my first draft, let you know how I should amend when I receive the comments from the teacher, of course, noona is always welcome to teach me(she's my japanese mate)!

私の日本語を始めたきっかけ

私の中学校の時、学校は　私に　日本へ　ホームステイに　行かせました。私は　日本の家族に　五日　住みました。あの時は　とても楽しかったです。帰ってから　この家族に　連絡するために　よく　手紙を　書かれました。しかし　沢山手紙を　出したのに　返事を　ちっとも　もらわなくて、この家族は　英語を　なかなか　分からないかもしれないと　思いました。それで　日本語で　手紙を書けることが　私の日本語を始めたきっかけです。ところで　最近に　アジアの経済がよく発展していますが　ビジネスを　うまく　するように　多いアジアの語ができるのに　必要です。では　日本語のほかに　私は　五年までに　韓国語か　タイ語か　全部が上手になっていると思いますよ。